Re: Re: [nukkad] Aarti... declares...

["Mahesh chandra gupta" <>]

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Man did not weave the web of life - he is merely a strand in it. Whatever
he does to the web, he does to himself. Attributed to Chief Seattle 1854
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Original version 

" Aap kuchh hame soonaaiye, 
Ham aapko  kuchh soonaayege. " 

Refined version 

' Aap kuchh hame  soonaaiye, 
Ham  kuchh aapko soonaayege. ' 

what's Shaayar MCG's comment 
on this original and refinement ?

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ye sunanaa, sunaanaa
ye kucch gun-gunaanaa
ye daanton mein naazuk
ungaliyaan  dabaanaa

ye karnaa sawaalon ka
phir muskaraanaa
jawaabon ko sun kar
ye sar ko hilaanaa

kiyaa hai adaaon ne
mad-hosh hamko
na sunane, sunaane ka
ab hosh hamko.

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Whispering sweet nothings to you
Listening to your groans and giggles
And watching your innocent face
Holding in the teeth your fingers

Your asking confusing questions
And then giving a blushing smile
When I try to give the answer
Your shaking your head awhile

These all sorts of gestures yours
Have me so intoxicated
Talking, listening no more matter
By looks I am fascinated.


MC Gupta ‘Khalish’
25 August 2003
www.writing.com/authors/mcgupta44

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