Re: As I close my eyes.....

["Raghvendra Kulkarni" <>]

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Hi !

I've been a member a of this list for more than a year but always used to be
silent spectator. Nothing prompted me to reply except this poem of yours.
Its absolutely brilliant !!

I can see the fear in his eyes...
> I can see that he really missed me...
> I only wish this distance was the barrier...
>
> As I close my eyes...
> His image becomes more clear...
> His voice is shaking...
> His face bleeding...
>
> He is much closer to death, than to me...
> How can I save him...
> Never felt so helpless in my life...
> Its death for him, but I am still alive...

These lines are exceptionally good. Keep up the good work Asha !!

-Cheers!!!

Raghvendra



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